Read this altered passage below from Ray Bradbury’s “All Summer in a Day” and write two or three sentences discussing
how the missing punctuation affects your fluency when reading.
And then of course the biggest crime of all was that she had come here only five years ago from Earth and she
remembered the sun and the way the sun was and the sky was when she was four in Ohio and they they had been on
Venus all their lives and they had been only two years old when last the sun came out and had long since forgotten the
color and heat of it and the way it really was but Margot remembered.