Read the excerpt from Laila’s essay, “Our Changing Society,” which she wrote for a school assignment (18) Used in this way,

Read the excerpt from Laila’s essay, “Our Changing Society,” which she wrote for a school assignment

(18) Used in this way, technology could actually become a tool to encourage creativity and maximize stuce
efficiency. (19) In addition, students who are required to read classic literature such as Shakespeare could
share their interpretation of the text in a blog, which could be accessed by other students who would then
share their own views.
Which change should be made to sentence (19)?
deleting the comma after “blog
O changing “in addition to “for instance”
O changing in addition” to “however”
deleting the phrase “such as”
Mark this and retum
Save and Exit


Answer:

No change should be made to sentence (19).

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